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The Devon Legacy

Author Notes:

JustNoPoint 10/24/2011, 5:11 AM edit delete
And this is my nightmare layout. Wanting the rays of light to create the panels. It took me quite some time to set this page up.

I really like the way my stuff looks better drawn with the darker shading styles, problem is, that isn't how I want this comic to look all the time. I need to save my darker stuff for the darker issues and refine the simpler style here with better structure.


Patrick D. 10/24/2011, 6:30 AM edit delete reply

Patrick D.
This guy is doing a pretty good job at looking menacing but his threat is diminished by that daisy chain around his neck. Now he just looks hilarious!
It does speak volumes about a clean, peaceful world when someone would rather risk getting killed by toxic gas than live there doesn't it?
man in black 10/24/2011, 7:41 PM edit delete reply

man in black
stupid crazy man won't listen to reason
Mlai 10/25/2011, 7:53 AM edit delete reply

I like how the Atlantean facial expression for abject fear is the same as the expression for seething anger. ;D
Guest 2/25/2012, 1:04 PM edit delete reply

You did a really nice job on the layout. I love the rays of light.
Guest 10/29/2013, 3:23 PM edit delete reply

That hostage taking guy is wearing a daisey cain, is that Atlantean fashion? Good job on this page, the arts come a long way from what it was in the earlier chapters.
JustNoPoint 10/29/2013, 9:59 PM edit delete reply

Yep! There is an era of dress in my head that I base it on. But for the life of me I cannot remember when/where it's from. So it's more than likely become a bit of an amalgam of several with some high tech thrown in at times.
And thanks for the compliment!

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