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The Devon Legacy

Author Notes:

JustNoPoint 11/29/2011, 8:34 AM edit delete
Trying MANY MANY new things. I have to get better at explosions. I think this turned out real well!

I have no clue if this layout flows properly. Another experimental layout. I'm wondering if I should have at least added another border underneath the spot where Power explodes and the scene where you see the explosion headed towards Phern, Pulna, and Codo.

Later comment ~~~~
Though the page 'looks' cool like this, I dub it a failed experiment for flow purposes and will not make another page lay out like this. Ah well, I learned a lot and I still really like the page. I can't beat myself up every time I screw up. As long as I learn from it it's no big deal.

Present day comment~~~
Yeah, read the top left panel, then right, then the middle. I really hate how I messed up on this experimental layout. At 1st the explosion in the top middle was not separated from the big explosion and it confused readers more so I added a border to split the action.


man in black 11/29/2011, 6:54 PM edit delete reply

man in black
great page
Atsuuikakura 11/14/2013, 2:02 AM edit delete reply

He isn't looking too good there, all he needs to do is get his legs chopped off and he can be the alien black knight.
JustNoPoint 11/15/2013, 9:06 AM edit delete reply

Which one would be the dreaded bunny?!!!

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