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Author Notes:

JustNoPoint 11/29/2011, 8:34 AM edit delete
JustNoPoint
Trying MANY MANY new things. I have to get better at explosions. I think this turned out real well!

I have no clue if this layout flows properly. Another experimental layout. I'm wondering if I should have at least added another border underneath the spot where Power explodes and the scene where you see the explosion headed towards Phern, Pulna, and Codo.

Later comment ~~~~
Though the page 'looks' cool like this, I dub it a failed experiment for flow purposes and will not make another page lay out like this. Ah well, I learned a lot and I still really like the page. I can't beat myself up every time I screw up. As long as I learn from it it's no big deal.

Present day comment~~~
Yeah, read the top left panel, then right, then the middle. I really hate how I messed up on this experimental layout. At 1st the explosion in the top middle was not separated from the big explosion and it confused readers more so I added a border to split the action.

Comments:

man in black 11/29/2011, 6:54 PM edit delete reply

man in black
great page
Atsuuikakura 11/14/2013, 2:02 AM edit delete reply

Atsuuikakura
He isn't looking too good there, all he needs to do is get his legs chopped off and he can be the alien black knight.
JustNoPoint 11/15/2013, 9:06 AM edit delete reply

JustNoPoint
Which one would be the dreaded bunny?!!!

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