The Devon Legacy Prologue | Issue 01

Author Notes:

JustNoPoint 5/21/2011, 4:21 AM edit delete

When I originally made this page it was nothing but copy paste talking heads. It was the laziest page I'd ever made :P

Before I printed the comic I went back and redrew this.

I still think there is too much talking and not a decent PICTURE to justify all the exposition. But it's too late to worry now. Moving on.

Comments:

talkiness

I can forgive talkiness early on. And if it's done well enough.

JustNoPoint 5/22/2011, 4:26 AM edit delete reply

This ones not done well enough though :P

someoneyouknow... 5/23/2011, 6:52 PM edit delete reply

:)

The first time I read this, this is where I realized I was going to like this story. :)
See? Totally real...

JustNoPoint 5/23/2011, 7:23 PM edit delete reply

Why did you start liking it on this particular page? It's probably my least favorite page XD

someoneyouknow... 5/23/2011, 7:33 PM edit delete reply

because

the facial expressions :)

Peter Palmiotti 6/4/2011, 12:30 AM edit delete reply

I do like the last panel.